Score: 7

"bug"

submission: The cross challenges

date: October 10, 2008

at lvl 4, starting from the tutorial, the body bugged out after hitting the wall closest to the blue switch.

Score: 4

"can't follow"

submission: Final Bakery VII Trailer

date: April 12, 2008

I couldn't follow this flash man. Improve on you story telling.
Your priority should be text location. make sure to follow the reading laws: left-right, up-down in bubble placement. Using a cleaner font too would reduce strain on older eyes.

Score: 8

"neat"

submission: Dusted

date: April 12, 2008

I like the speed display. It can add a a competitive element. Players could yell: "I made it to 10.12!".

I found the limited timer were new powerups exist in the world annoying. But i reason this is a better method to add challenge to players who can barely keep up with the falling blocks. Reconsidering this annoyance, I now agree that it is a neat tidbit to the gameplay.

Score: 7

"commentary"

submission: RE-UNdead shorts

date: April 10, 2008

By adding commentary for what the companion cube is saying. It may make your flash more humorous and easier to follow.

Score: 5

"What"

submission: Sumi-E Quest

date: April 9, 2008

The death system and color choice needs improvement. You blink to the start on death, which i find frustrating. It makes it harder to see what killed me.

The colors! Man. Do a search on "color theory", Learning this would help everyones eyes! @.@

Score: 5

"what?"

submission: The Men's Room Conspiracy

date: April 8, 2008

This preloader is difficult to see if the flash it loading.

You need to improve the opening menu. I was slow to see what to click, and how to play.

Score: 5

"O.@"

submission: Tribute to Artemisbell

date: April 8, 2008

The "uncany valley" has been reached. This video feels awkward to me...

Score: 0

"Why bother"

submission: KroniK Hippo Mafia

date: April 8, 2008

Your first impression suggests you didn't even spend the time to make something worth of NGs.

Score: 6

"creative"

submission: Super Smash Bros Plush

date: April 8, 2008

Neat idea using plushes for animation. But the video progresses to slowly to keep our attention. Perhaps a speed increase, and addition of more special effects to combat-- like that of our beloved Smash bros-- will improved your animation's visual eye candy?

Score: 6

"i like it"

submission: Shape-Invasion

date: April 8, 2008

The simple setup can be fun for awhile. But, eventually moving a object around to protect something can get boring if that is all to the game play.